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She looked every inch the socialite and ornamental political wife - pristine and unrumpled even at ten in the night.
This is a completely different perspective than we got of Ash at the school play. Great job on rounding out the character.

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Clark was reminded, for the first time in many long years that this man had loved the same woman he did, once upon a lifetime.
Really??? I hope we get to learn more about this.

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Clark, when it comes to counting lives, Lois was born more flush than your resident alley cat.
great line

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“No fire. I put it out earlier,” rejoined Clark wryly and was rewarded by a slight smile from her.
They know he moonlights in tights, so the Westlakes are seriously intimate friends of the Kents.

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she redefined the meaning of “paranoid”. Which was probably why she had lived as long as this - a fact which she kept reminding them both.
This woman must have more going on than the average political wife.

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You trust me, don’t you?”

Was it just Clark’s imagination or did that question seem loaded?
Um. Suddenly for some reason I don't. Trust her, I mean.

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His ID tag read “Roland West”.
Any relation to Westlake or is this a coincidence?

I absolutely *love* your use of Sleeping Beauty in this chapter and the way it cuts back and forth. Absolutely inspired.

And the snippets of memory, love those too.

This was a hell of a chapter. The tension in the second half was exquisite. I could practically hear the haunting orchestra as it cut between the hospital and Clark with the twins. Hasini, I cannot believe you ever dared to say that you can't write. This is solid gold.


lisa in the sky with diamonds