Hi Sue, I read this story and all the proof series and it is excellent !

In this vignette, When you wrote the relationship between Lois and CLark when they danced, it is very sensual. The way you write, plunge me into the fiction and it is amazing !

I hope I am clear, I am not very good with FDK and I am very sorry if I make errors of spelling or grammar, but I am French and I not mastery all the language.

ThankS Sue for this series !