Hi cuidadora! Thank you for the lovely feedback. It's good to see what's working about the flashbacks and Alt-Lois's early life. Even in canon universe, we don't get a lot of background on Lois.
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Love how she tells Clark she's psychic, and he completely misses it as a confession. Nice parallel to Canon Lois not recognizing Clark and Superman as the same person.
I'm glad this worked for you. It was a lot of fun to parallel Clark's aborted efforts to tell Lois in the series.
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Clark's gentle handling of Lois and her emotions is delightful.
Aww, thanks. After all, for all his power, he does have a gentle heart.

KathyB! Thanks for providing feedback.