Hi Tracey. Thank you so much for your comments. It's good to know that the flashback scenes are working, as well as the differences to Lois's character. As for whether she sticks around long, all I will say is ... RAFO.
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Hmmm. I have a suggestion for how they could get to know one another better. blush What? I was totally thinking board games, too.
LOL! lol
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I love how you keep some things the same and then surprise me by reversing some things from the way we know them. Keeps me interested as a reader!
Thanks for that feedback. Intention doesn't always meet expectation, so it's nice to know that these twists are working for the reader.
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Are we going to get to see more of their game night? Or it is onto bigger and better things in the next part? Looking forward to it!
You'll have to let me know if what comes next is either bigger or better. Next part coming up right away.