Originally Posted by PuffyTiger
I really enjoyed this perspective on that famous scene. And don't worry about it having been rewritten before, one of the things I love about good fanfic are all the ways and shades authors can explore the fundamental realities in the show and between the characters. So bring on all the rewrites, I'll read them all smile

I agree completely. I think you captured their characters and relationship better than the show. When I think of this scene in the future, yours is the one that will come to mind first.

Shallowford