What a delightful story! I could actually see Lois and Superman talking in her apartment. Her nose is red and raw from blowing her nose using paper towels rather than tissues.

All the right touches of drama, humor and kindness are here for us to enjoy and smile over. Lois and Superman or rather Clark were first and foremost friends and that gentle quality of their relationship comes shining through.

I would have never thought that English was not your first language.

Please feel free to write another story or better yet, how about a sequel?

Welcome to the writer's side of the msbs!

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.