Well, it took two solid weeks, but I've finally read the whole story from part 1!
I'm so impressed; I can't even begin to imagine how you're able to write so much! I really loved how you used Cat - you kept her flirtatiousness from the show, but added what always should have been there: a solid reporter in her own right with legitimate feelings and multiple dimensions to her personality. I like the changes between alt-Clark and the alt-alt world and how those differences have influenced the plot. And, though it took some time to get there, I'm glad that Lois and Clark are clearing away some of the dishonesty and are coming closer together. That can only lead to more nfic distractions!
