Wonderful job, cuidadora
. And first attempt? Wow
.
I very much enjoyed the parallels you created between Mary Frances and Superman. It was such a creative idea to draw from those similarities in your story, weave them in as you did. And I totally echo being impressed by connecting the nun in JSN with a nun from the Pilot. I love how much 'smaller' of a world it seems when a character can overlap like that.
I knew the scene immediately that you were referring to when I started the story. It's always struck me as such a strange time and place for Lois and (
while Clark dressed as) Superman to try to have a discussion
.
Amazing job
Laura
