What a phenomenal debut. I am impressed. I hope that this proves to be but the first of many fanfics we'll see from you.
My favourite line was:
Mary Frances promised to help Lois see how imperfection was not the same as failure. Sadly, she knew that lesson was not complete when class ended.
So true!
I loved how Mother Mary Frances was just like Clark with her own secret identity so that she can escape from the idolization and just be herself.
Joy,
Lynn
