For your first effort this was light an enjoyable to read, but also thought provoking.

lois might have missed what Mary Frances was saying, but at least Superman benefited from her actions.

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.