I loved the title!! So descriptive. I also loved the reference to clones and amnesia
I get so tired of stories where everything that could possibly go wrong, goes wrong and gets between these two. I mean they have enough problems communicating on this subject without Clark running off to stop a holdup, Lois' phone ringing, Jimmy knocking on the door, etc. Nice to see a story where the only obstacle is themselves and they eventually overcome that obstacle.
Nice job.
Mike