Just an ultra-short that came to me this morning.
Considering that I don't usually like next-gen stories, I seem to write my share of them.
My own suspicion is that if Lois is angry with her daughter, it wouldn't be because she was a few minutes late, it would be because she was flying in public when she clearly wasn't ready yet. (Not only couldn't she navigate, she flew in a *gown*.
)
Frankly, the narrator strikes me as being a bit flighty.
What do you all think?
Joy,
Lynn
