She doesn't want a ring? huh How disappointing. help

She doesn't want to tell anyone? confused Really? shocked

Yup, this is classic Lois and Clark. He pursues and she panics.

Like MikeM said, this is a perfect set-up for a revelation! Clark is really going to have to be super fast in order to save his lady love. Lois is gonna be alive but really angry.

The phone conversations were very much Lois and Clark. I could see them talking to one another, including the split screen.

Kudos! thumbsup

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.