I liked this part, but it was too short. It definitely left me wanting more.

So what are the odds that Lois and Clark are the HMWCs for each other? (Once again, I'm hearing "If You Like Pina Coladas" while I'm reading this story.)

Incidentally, I liked you use of an image in the story; I don't think I've ever seen that done before, and it worked out very well.

Joy,
Lynn