all the head hopping in Lois Unbuttoned...
But, see, I GEd Lois Unbuttoned, and I can't even say that I noticed the head-hopping. I was just so blown away by the lovely, sweet, WAFFy and funny story by this obviously hugely talented newbie writer.
See? No matter how bad
you think a story is, there are always readers out there who like it...
Wendy
