Nancy, this was wonderful, and as been said already, I really like the premise
And to think that this is your first fic... much better than my first pitiful attempt :p
Something that nobody else has mentioned that caught my eye was that when Clark went into the bathroom after blowing up at Lois and spun into the 'suit' he never spun out of it again before she came to the door. That would have been a pretty big clue right there <g>
Keep Penning,
