Hi,
I read all 7 parts in one sitting. I like the pilot clues that no one, somehow, ever picked up on. The hand on the bus, the man in the manhole. Makes you realize that but for the sake of entertainment, if Lois REALLY was that good as an investigative reporter, she would really have figured out who he was.
Then again, would glasses REALLY fool anyone LOL?
Good creative story, definitely felt like season 1. Look forward to your next offering!
