I like the premise! An already established relationship with Lex, and no Clark Kent in sight (yet!)!
Re Lex:
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Oh, well, she'd think about his motives later.
Why do I think that is a HUGE mistake? help

Really intrigued where you'll take this! Will Lois begin investigating a Clark Kent before she actually meets him? And since he didn't make his debut as Superman at Eprad, where is he??

Got me hooked! Bring it on! hyper


Errata I spotted, since you asked:
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heap of medal
should be 'metal' not 'medal'

Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. wink