Why do I think that is a HUGE mistake?
It will be fun to see how you develop this.
You have no idea!
Or perhaps we see Clark elsewhere on the Planet? Still searching for a place he fits?
Hmmm... that would be interesting.
Patrick, you seem to love the Nightfall premise! The only thing I can tell you about Nightfall in this story is
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I had to quibble about the moon's (lack of) atmosphere too.
Thanks you guys for pointing that out. When I'd originally written this I was thinking: 'right out the Earth's atmosphere and close to the moon'. And when I wrote it, look what I got!
And I'm glad to see no one has a problem with this being a long fic.
Thanks for reading and for posting such great feedback.
SQD(who's hoping she'll survive the next few parts
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