Nice. Very nice. The cremation bit cracked me up and I liked the way you handled Lois getting rid of Lex's money. I guess Franklin Stern must have made very good deal on buying Lois out. 500 mil to 1 bil for an empire that's worth 10-20 times as much? The one bit that surprised me was that Lois chose to have people believe she sold her herself for a story instead of having been fooled. But it's probably a crummy choice either way
Michael
