Interesting. You made the characters all very real. You put A true take of what Claude felt into the situation. That was different for us to think about Claudes side of the story. You also made Lois still have feelings for him, I found that to be very real. You just don't forget your first love no matter how much time goes by or who you are with. It was also real the way she wasn't ready to go further with CLark yet. You have a good understanding of relationship dynamics. Great job. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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