Hi Kae!
"Lois..."
No... please no. Don't let him ruin this moment with a declaration of undying love, she prayed fervently. She was unable to honestly return his feelings yet. She knew there was more than friendship between them - it would be tough to deny after that kiss - but she wasn't ready to acknowledge it yet. One step at a time. One tiny step at a time. She braced herself for the worst. "Yes, Clark?"
"Do you want me to tear him limb from limb?"
LOL. I loved that paragraphs, and what was next, and what was before...
A perfect story. Congratulations!
See ya & keep writing.
AnnaBtG.