Feedback for the 7th submission.
Lol! Well I love this part:
Clark didn’t know how Lois knew these places. He didn’t want to know. What he did know is that he’d put down hard earned money to buy a leather jacket with studs, a pair of leather pants his mom wouldn’t let him wear in public if she saw them – and she was the one who sewed together his spandex uniform – and a pair of biker boots. To complete the ensemble, Lois picked out a black t-shirt, an adhesive ear stud and several temporary tattoos, including a Superman logo.
Especially the bit about leather pants his mother wouldn't let him wear in public. Funny AND the added bonus of a halfway decent mental image.
He finally seemed to notice Clark standing beside Lois. “If that’s okay with you ‘Spike’. Love the look, by the way. The boys must really…” Scardino’s mouth twitched into a smirk.
Clark heard Lois’s heart rate jump. He was never quite sure exactly what happened then. Even with super speed he hadn’t quite caught the movement beside him. But suddenly Scardino was sitting on his behind on the concrete floor holding his nose.
SHE DECKED SCARDINO!!!! Yes!!! I love it.
Great last line and great job overall.
Especially the decking Scardino part.
Laura
