Ahahaha! I love it! That wiggle of the hips at the end and the teasing.
Perfect! You guys are really doing such a great job with these stories and this one of course was no different. Such a good job. ^_^
How did the dude die?? What caused him to fall over dead suddenly? A bit of this cries out as Sue... only because Sue tends to like to give us some plot but not give us all the details so she can focus more on b-plot. She leaves the rest up to our imagination.
These are really tough to figure out.
I have no idea.
