This is the second GTA submission feedback thread!
Feel free to discuss and speculate away.
If someone does suggest you as the writer of this piece, please don't refute or confirm them. Let's keep this a surprise. My own feedback...
Well, personally, I loved it. I hardly ever read stories dealing with an early first season Lois and Clark and I can forget how great they are!
Still, he had always enjoyed having his head firmly attached to the top of his neck.
This line was just great!
Oh and this...
She nodded appreciatively. “There is that.” She looked more closely at the dress and spluttered in surprise. “It’s a size 12! Do you really think I wear a size 12?”
“Well…” he hedged, not knowing quite what to say. She was clearly offended, but he couldn’t understand why. “I wear a 16-1/2 inch neck, so I figured yours would be a few inches smaller. I take it you wear an 11?”
was great!
But these guesses are a blast to read.
~Laura
