
(just consider this a standing ovation!)
This was, to put it clearly, simply wonderful. I love Lois POV stuff and you so clearly captured her thoughts here!
I loved how bossy and stubborn Martha was--not allowing her to starve to death on their Property.
Wonerful, wonderful, wonderful--not to be repetitive or anything, but I've got sinus problems and thinking is a bit hard, so you'll just have to put up with my limited vocabulary tonight.
Vonceil