Beautiful! I really liked the sensitive portrayal of Lois hurting after the Luthor thing and all the elements wrapped up so perfectly. I loved that first meeting between Lois and Clark, lol. The dialogue and Clark's expressions were priceless.

Then I also really loved the scene where Martha is telling Lois about the tabloids. I found that so painful, but at the same time Lois' recognition that she would do the same as the other people demonstrates how much she's matured.

Lastly, that fireworks scene was utterly spectacular. I loved the mood and the vibe of the fic so much. *sigh*.

alcyone


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