Wow! What a beautiful story. You write so well, it drew me right in and I couldn't put it down.
I love the images you created. Also your portrayal of Lois after the Luthor fiasco was dead on. I am so glad she came to Smallville.
Having Clark show up as a "ghost" was brilliant. I totally adored how they fell in love with each other without really knowing anything about the other. It shows that feelings are much more powerful than facts. Anything can happen.
Thank you for finding such a satisfying solution/end to such an aweful experience in Lois's life! I am so grateful for that. I already saved the story as one of my favorites!
Natascha
