I'm glad you all liked the 'Kinetic Girl' thing, too. That was LabRat's idea. When she was BR'ing the suit-creating scenes, I mentioned that I was thinking of 'Kinetic' for Lois's superhero personna, and she said something along the lines of "wouldn't it be funny if everybody kept calling her Kinetic Girl or something like that?" I loved the idea, so I took it and ran with it.
LOL - yes, I thought it would be amusing to note Lois's reaction if she picked up the paper the following morning after her debut and they'd called her Kinetic Girl. And I love what you did with that throwaway line in my beta file, Janet.
This story has been a real joy to beta all the way through. It's definitely going to be on my Kerth list for next year.
LabRat