Oh, Annie, I *love* this story!!! I'm sorry that I haven't had the chance to comment on the first two sections, but I enjoyed each one of them.
I can't stand Lana (guess that means you're writing her very well [g]), Clark is driving me crazy cause he's actually putting up with her, Lois is making me laugh, making me sigh, and making me cheer for her (terrific scene in the bathroom, btw!), and I'm thrilled that Jimmy has finally found that his purpose in life (beyond advancing Lois and Clark's plots [g]) is to annoy Lana.
I have no idea what you're feeding your muse, but please, keep doing it!! Your writing is amazing, and I can't wait to read the rest of this story.
Please post soon, okay?
Tracey
