While I've written several stories, this is the first one that I've had the nerve to post. I have posted three vignettes since I started posting this one, though. Since I'm new, I'll take any help I can get, so no, I don't mind at all. I guess sometimes I feel that the story has gotten 'cumbersome' and I wonder if the reader really wants all the detail. I know there have been many parts that I've just plain deleted because I didn't think people would be interested. I will re-think that.
I'm also interested in your characterization ideas. Feel free to email me. I will say though, that my characterization is not strictly LnC. I've been a Superman fan since I was a small child, and sometimes I find it difficult to stick with strictly LnC. I know I got a lot of flack over the Mayson incident - both here and via private email.
Any help you can offer will be greatly appreciated. Take a look at
Defeated and tell me what you think.
Nancy
