Thanks TOC, SNL, and Maria.
Take pictures with their cell phones - you called them min-comps? - all the time
Actually this is supposed to be mini-comp. I managed to leave the 'i' out. I'll fix that. This is set a few years into the future, and I figure by that time combination cell-phones / hand-held computers will be much more common than just a cell phone. I just thought calling them a mini-comp sounded like a logical name. And yes, kids like to take pics with them.
The confusion at the end of this story - the gray curtains, the blue blanket, being in the hospital emergency room, and Jon's outfit - will be cleared up in the next part.
As for Hannah and Jenni talking about their boyfriends, isn't this typical behaviour for teenagers?
Maria noted:
I thought the mother was not in her apartment when he went there?
She wasn't. He was bluffing. Thanks for catching this. I had a part where the police tell them their mother is okay. I guess I'm like Ann. My mouse must have been hurt and forgot to cut and paste. Anyway, I forgot to paste that part in. I'll fix it.
Nancy
