Nicely done. It was a fun, well written story.
I enjoyed the change of pace of the first person narrative, though I may be biased because it was Lois' point of view.
First fic, huh? It's nice to know that the supply of writers for this fandom continues to replenish itself.
Tank (who thinks the story could have been a little bit better if Lois hadn't been able to wash the kryptonite paint out of her hair and would have had to cut it out.
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