Ok, so I'm new to the boards, and just stumbled on your story. Really excellent work! I just read it start to finish, you had me on the edge of my seat! I even laughed aloud in appropriate moments and felt all the angst! I love the idea of them being distracted by yumminess on each other's lips, too. I have only one little nitpick... I speak French, and there's no 'e' at the end of pain au chocolat wink itty, bitty, tiny, nitpick. But great, great story!!!

Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. wink