Sue I was busy writing when you were posting this story so I missed out on it.
But after finding out later what an awesome writer my beta reader is, I had to go back and read this just as soon as I found the time.
Wow, Sue. Just wow.

After beta reading for you on the PG "Revisionist History", I knew you were talented, awesome...
But wow! This was incredible. I loved every second. Thank you for doing the PG version of this. I wish I had been around to beta this for you too. Anytime you want a PG beta just let me know.
