This was perfect! The opening lines were so in character and immediately captured my attention. Lois saying she loved Clark after Superman kisses her: brilliant! Clark waiting to reveal himself after he was shot: stupid as usual, but isn't that the point of TOGOM rewrites. I can't wait for part 2!
Susan (whose husband, who has a birthday today, appreciates any recognition of the plight of those who have a birthday near the holidays)
