This is a gentle, sweet gem of a story. Lois is much more relaxed in this version of GGGOH than the original.

Rachel Harris on the other hand seems to have taken on some of Lana's more unpleasant traits.

Martha and Jonathan as always are the BEST parents a man could have! Who else would laugh at Lois's 'observation' that Jonathan might just be a cross dresser? Martha's hair is the same shade as Rachel's?

Keep going KenJ, I might be late commenting, but as always I'll eventually catch up! thumbsup

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.