Hi John,
Thanks for reading and the FDK!
There are some things I have added and there are some things from the script that wound up on the cutting room floor. The line about Deja Vu was an add that I made. The comment about Rachel winning the election by promising to buy a couple of computers was in the script.
None of the thoughts were in either the show or the script. They are the product of my fevered imagination which I added to make the story more enjoyable and move it in the direction I want it to go. In order for us to have any inkling as to just what Rachel was thinking they would have had to do voice - over and that wasn't happening so I had to fill in the blanks as it were.
Most if not all of the conversations are as near the show/script as I can make them, but there are inevitable variations.
