Is it just me, or is the whole "I've got a deja vu feeling" a new line?
I think you added more to the Clark/Lois/Rachel interchange than was even in the script. I know the line about beating Fordman and the computers was not actually in the show.
Lois's "We haven't" sounded a lot like she was saying "We haven't slept together yet."
I would say "But were exploring our possibilities" is the first truly major point of departure from the original.
Lois is open to dating Clark.
I liked the Lois/Clark/Jonathan/Martha scene, which I think had some additions.
