I love it!
Jonathan actually reminds me in some ways of my son. Many people on the autism spectrum, my son included, share some traits with people with OCD, namely an extreme attention to details and a need for everything to be "just so."
I would definitely love to see more of this universe. Perhaps a prequel which covers Jonathan's initial diagnosis and his parents coming to terms with it. Perhaps a story showing how his nascent powers affected him. (Although there are plenty of "L&C's kid comes of age as his/her powers emerge" stories, this one would really stand out, since the others don't deal with OCD.) And, of course, there's always the "first public appearance as a superhero" story to be written.
To paraphrase Oliver, "Please, ma'am, may I have some more?"
Joy,
Lynn
