-- Continuation of my Response to John's FDK --
Well it is where he lives.
Canon dialogue.
I think it should be "what to do to".
You're right. Fixed.
This can't be what he normally does with them, otherwise he wouldn't have them around when he needed them.
No, I'm sure not, but he doesn't remember what he usually does with them.
Hopefully noone does a search of his roof anytime soon.
He'd have more troubles if someone else was out on his roof.
Well I guess "here" is indefinite enough, that that is the truth.
More canon dialogue.
Oh, she would be worried about that.
It's good that she's worried about Clark.
Well, maybe the robbers, abductors or others left something behind in the alley.
LOIS: Yeah, right.
Isn't this a set of actions Superman does to Lois more than Clark?
CLARK: Ooops?
She did notice that it was not what Clark normally did.
She noticed it the night before, but now it's the second time and it's starting to bother her.
I was so hoping she would recognize him as Superman.
Lois?
Just keep telling her that Clark.
LOIS: Me, too. Though I don't know why we need to vote.
He needs to accept the truth of her saying it is not his fault that he lost his memory.
Technically, he did go willingly with the abductors.
she is about to see the truth.
Define "about to".
See, she would forgive his not saving the world from Nightfall.
Not really in the same category as the other stuff.
Somehow I think if he does that she will not want to go immediately to bed with him. A-because she will be angry and B-she will insist he go stop Nightfall.
C- Cat's still up in his apartment.
I wonder if it should be more "who you used to be or what you used to do". The current wording is awkward at best.
Your wording sounds better than mine. Thanks. Fixed.
OK, I doubt he will say that now, but it would be fun.
It could be, but it's not scheduled for a revelation at this point and time.
I have wonder if it should not be "to concentrate" to match the "to stop" in the first part of the sentance.
That makes sense. Fixed.
Clark:Except who he is when he is not in the cape.
Lois:What? He sometimes disguises himself as someone else? Who?
Actually, he almost did say that.
I guess sometimes Lois' ranting helps Clark.
Lois's ranting just stopped him from confessing that he's Superman.
Good plan in theory. If Lois would give him a chance to say anything.
CLARK: I don't know what you mean. Lois never...
LOIS: How about another kiss first?
CLARK: Okay. <<kiss>> As I was saying, Lois doesn't...
LOIS: Do you have anything to eat at your apartment or should we go get something from the store?
CLARK: No, I have food. Lois is really polite and never...
LOIS: I was thinking something in the line of whipped cream?
CLARK:
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You're right! We need to go to the grocery store. <<zips off returns with whipped cream, chocolate sauce, a box of cookies, and a thing of chocoalte ice cream>>
LOIS: You're Superman?!
CLARK: What? No sundaes now? Yeah, I was about to tell you about...
LOIS: How could you not tell me?
CAT: <<Calling from above>> I like sundaes!
LOIS: No, she doesn't. She's lying.
CLARK: You kept interrupting...
LOIS: I don't interrupt! How dare you suggest such a thing!
CLARK: Should I just forfit now?
LOIS: <<grabs chocolate ice cream, dumps whipping cream over his head and marches off>>
CLARK: What'd I say?
He is holding her. Hopefully she thinks of the Honeymoon Suite and not Superman at this moment.
So, NOW you don't want her to find out?
His memory is coming back.
Some of it.
