Oooh. I just realized I forgot to thank my wonderful Beta Reader. Thank you so much, Mrs. Luthor!
Thank you all for your kind words. More later, I'm really supposed to be cleaning up. :rolleyes:
EDIT: Okay, I've fixed it now. Sorry, Mrs. L.
VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.