This was very scary. I thought Lois was going to be too stubborn but then Clark did something miraculous! wonderful job. Wow! I loved how Scardino kept seeing Clark for the first time as a person. I am so glad Clark convinced her to stay. And the last bit about him getting the water to wash her hair was just incredible! they've come 360 degrees Wow. Loved it!!!

I was so excited I accidentally posted in the fiction instead of here. Sorry! If there is a moderator here maybe they can remove it from the end of your story.

Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

Caroline's "Stardust"