Delightful part. What I most liked was what you didn't have Lois do, shout for Superman as soon as she was free.
Tales where she shouts for him and he hears her halfway around the globe, often ignoring the slow speed of sound, always bug me.
Between the distance, all the other sounds, and the slow speed of sound, I find it odd that Clark always hears her.
Your Lois is out and away and not making a fool of herself jumping up and down yelling "Superman".
I enjoy the way she put the pieces together about Clark being Superman.
If it was anyone else, I'd think that you cheated, but it's friggin' Superman."
Delightful.
It also shows that in your 'Verse people don't automatically assume a relationship between Lois and Superman. One of the things about "Superman Returns" that always bugs me is the willingness of Superman to show in public how much he cares about Lois, even after it has already placed her at extreme risk in Superman II.
A delightful part.
