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"I love you," she said again and giggled as a rush of affection for Clark swept through her. No one, not even Superman, had made her feel the way Clark did. Well, okay, maybe Superman had come close… No! She wasn't going to dwell on it. Her choice was definitely made.
GUUSSSSSHHHHHH. Loved that whole entire scene--and would amost admit that it might be my favorite but part 2 and 5 kind of trump it for obvious reasons.

IMO, I think you achieved the same reaction without the kiss--and after re-reading the version that you sent me and this version I understood what it was that you were trying to convey. Hope I didn't throw you too much off kilter. Because as your beta I respect the crap outta ya and would not want you to change something that you feel passionate about regardless how I think.

Almost done!! I can't believe we're almost to the end.

Randy gave me "rewrite history"

"We're both barefoot, both flushed, and we both look guilty as hell. Clark has finger-combed his hair but I'm positive mine looks like I was just f… fished out of the river."

<3 this fic!
'The Next Step' By Sue S.

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