Great interaction between Lois and Clark and the way Lois told Clark that she knew his second biggest secret.
However, the curb that you've thrown for the story - i.e. Clark possibly going back to Metropolis so that Perry won't have to retire and keep Alice - is just ... totally unexpected.
But, I also don't like this purely evil Mayson (I do hope you kill her off quickly or soon). You have stated that you needed a villian, so in that regard, she does serve a good purpose for the story (but I am in someway hoping she doesn't pose too much a threat to either Clark/Superman or Ultrawoman).
I am looking forward to the next part and more Lois and Clark (naturally)
