I agree with everyone else that the conversation between Lois and Clark was lovely!
"Clark?"
"Uhm?"
"Just in case you were wondering," Lois said. "I love you more than I love Hawthorn."
Aaaawwwwwwwww!!!
Unfortunately, I agree with Betty that I have a hard time accepting this version of Mayson. Of course, I never like villains as such, and seeing a moderately likable character turn unreasonably bad makes it worse. I have never
liked Mayson, of course. After all, she was trying to get the man that I wanted Lois to have! But I could respect her. This Mayson, by contrast, is just awfully bad for no good reason.
Well, I'm not reading this fic for Mayson's sake, and I'm looking forward to seeing much more of Lois and Clark in it!
Ann
