Well done. Very well done.
After the final wrap I was glad it was a one shot. Clearly redeeming this version of Lois & Kal El would never quite succeed.
I say Kal El instead of Clark because to my mind this has to be a case where Kal El was NOT raised by the Kents.
May I suggest that when you send this to the archive you move this section
So I wrote this during a slow night at work, and when I was typing it up, I feared that perhaps I was losing my evil edge… So I sent it to my poor, unsuspecting beta, who was really expecting something else, and… Well, I assure you that carolm had absolutely nothing to do with this. In fact, I think she betad more out of shock than anything, the poor dear…
to the bottom?
I say this because it would have twice the impact on me if these comments hadn't warned me that a twist was coming.
