WOW Jenn! I'm totally speechless!
The idea of a first-person narrating the story was very good. Like Lady C said it's like, "I'm this person" and that brings someone more deeper into a story.
Thanks for sharing this story with us! You really did great!
I hope you'll write a sequel! I would love to see the rainbow!
*hugs*
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