Jenn, it was a really moving story. As I've said before, I like your style. It's very sober but so convincing. The idea of the first person narration is good because it brings a lot of emotion. When you read "I" you just have to imagine it's you.
Terrific story. I'm glad you posted it.
I checked the weather for 2008 and I can see a rainbow.
Clemmypie
